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lijahlover
17 March 2011 @ 11:22 pm
Harry/Draco poem of obsession  
Title:Obsess Over You
Author:lijahlover
Pairing:Pre Harry/Draco
Style:Acrostic freeverse
Rating:G
Warnings:Draco is desperate for Harry
Disclaimer:I don't own them because they would have shagged in the books if I had.




Dragging my eyes away from you
Reluctantly I focus on my friends
Asking me about things I care nothing about.
Can't they shut up and let me obsess over you?
Over me or under me I imagine you whisper,"You're mine"
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lijahlover: First comment cookies!lijahlover on March 18th, 2011 05:01 am (UTC)
Thanks I kinda love writing this kind of poetry. This is my fourth one I have done but I can see writing more this way.

I have done both their first and last names I just have to come up with more words. I will soon I'm sure.
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angelskiss: J2 - Pink Shirts (Chest Touch)angelskiss on March 18th, 2011 07:06 am (UTC)
Oooh! Very well done!
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lijahlover: Tom in a sexy B/W icon behind barslijahlover on March 18th, 2011 01:39 pm (UTC)
Thanks so much I enjoy writing this kind of poetry...
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lynx212: Ice Snow Flakelynx212 on March 18th, 2011 01:33 pm (UTC)
Wonderful! Absolutely wonderful!

I love your disclaimer btw...lol ^_^
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lijahlover: Tom in a suit looking finelijahlover on March 18th, 2011 01:41 pm (UTC)
Thanks hun and yes I usually put up that kind of disclaimer because it's the gospel truth :)

My books would have been more steamy not really for children ;)
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blueboyfeyblueboyfey on March 18th, 2011 05:29 pm (UTC)
Awwwww! Poor obsessed Draco! love it!
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lijahlover: Tom in a sexy B/W icon behind barslijahlover on March 18th, 2011 08:41 pm (UTC)
Thanks and now I have done both of their first and last names I need to come up with more ideas for words to use.
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leticiaeleticiae on March 21st, 2011 02:09 am (UTC)
I love poems that spell things out. That was interesting.
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lijahlover: B/W-H/D standing closelijahlover on March 21st, 2011 03:03 am (UTC)
Thanks then you should like the three poems I did of obsession befor it with the names

Harry
Potter
Malfoy
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