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18 April 2008 @ 01:49 am
Domlijah Part Two  
Unexpected Part Two
Authorlijahlover
Domlijah
Rating:NC-17
In the last part they decide to take a shower together to get cleaned up. There's sex and rimming in this part.
This is dedicated to those who asked for more so I gave you more *hugs*
betaed by the lovely mon_ami_runa



Dom pulls Elijah into the shower with him under the spraying massaging water beating down on them. Dom starts to press Elijah back as he licks and sucks the water off of his slick skin, causing Elijah to gasp and press closer to him.



Dom lips travel over Elijah's face and throat tenderly kissing as he rubs against his body. He growls as he turns Elijah around and presses his body forward to press against the wet tiles. Dom takes his time kissing the back of his sensitive neck working his way slowly down running his tongue down his spine as he gets on his knees. He spreads Elijah open and starts to lick and push his tongue inside his opening, working his tongue as deep inside as he can. Elijah is panting, groaning and pressing backwards on Dom's talented clever tongue. "I'm going to come by just your tongue in me, fuck me soon, please, Dom, God please" Elijah whines desperately.



Dom feels something animistic snap inside him at Elijah's frantic pleading and whining. He shoves his tongue inside a few more times to stroke his prostate with each thrust of his tongue making Elijah scream. Dom stands up and grips his lover’s hips and slowly pushes inside Elijah's well loosened, quivering hole. Dom starts a fast hard steady pace slamming deep inside with each thrust. He reaches around and starts to stroke Elijah with firm strokes of his hand. Dom grabs Elijah's hair and pulls his head back to suck on his neck leaving a bruise on his tender skin. "I want to feel you come deep inside me," demands Elijah as he comes in Dom's hand. Dom comes not long soon after and falls to his knees again he licks all of the come from inside Elijah's body and stands up licking his lips and smirking at him.


Crushing his mouth to Elijah's, Dom says "I wanted you to know how much I missed you while you were gone."


"Fuck, Dom I was only gone a few days visiting family. I love you."


"I love you too babe," whispers Dom as he presses his mouth to Elijah's.

End
Authors Note:You can easily reach the prostate with your tongue or even a finger tip it's not far inside at all. Just some FYI


 
 
 
Saurasaura_ on April 18th, 2008 10:14 am (UTC)
There's this saying: "you were one for one hour but it seemed an age" --which your fic reminded me of. It's a fantastic feeling to have someone clinging to you as if you'd be gone for a lot of time.

Sex in the shower is very difficult to write, but you did it masterfully. Congratulations!!!

About your note.... I heard the opposite from a nurse.... and from what I read, it's quite far inside... Now I'm confused, really.
lijahlover: First comment cookies!lijahlover on April 18th, 2008 07:48 pm (UTC)
Shower sex is *HOT* but your right fun to write XD
That's interesting about what the nurse said my husband told me were it was and I was shocked to I almost called him a liar and he just gave me that look LOL XD
Aprilkataprilkat on April 18th, 2008 11:30 am (UTC)
I love how you will do what we ask!

What a shower! Phew - hot stuff!
lijahlover: Frodolijahlover on April 18th, 2008 07:48 pm (UTC)
Thanks so much hun XD
Bubba: KrishnaGovindaabsynthedrinker on April 18th, 2008 11:54 am (UTC)
about the A/N. If you have a really long tongue of iron maybe. Otherwise it is not completely likely. Good fic though! Thanks!

Peace,

Bubba
lijahlover: Eye of the beholder-Elijahlijahlover on April 18th, 2008 07:50 pm (UTC)
Thanks and mabye I missunderstood what my husband said about it that's very possible Thank you XD
hapendfro on April 18th, 2008 12:51 pm (UTC)
Dom and Elijah, now there's an otp to cling to. Great job. still confused about the actually location of said prostrate, but no matter still hot.
lijahlover: Dom kissing Elijah's handlijahlover on April 18th, 2008 07:52 pm (UTC)
You know so am I my husband informed me were it is but I'm not so sure I didn't get confused about it *hugs*