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04 September 2009 @ 11:32 pm

HP poetic-Fall

Title:As I Fall
Author:

lijahlover
Pairing:Pick your favorite one and that's it.
Rating:G
Warnings:Major longing with determination...
Written in free-verse for poetic_hp -Fall

It's been awhile that I wrote a poem.... :)

I feel a tightening in my chest as I watch you with friends.

I blankly look at the leaves turning color as I envision us together;someday.

The crisp,cool breeze blows around me,chilling my body.

I need you,desire you to be close to me.

"Will you catch me as I fall or turn away?"

Tags: poem

Current Location: kansas city

Current Mood: cheerful

Current Music: Shattered-OAR

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autumnverse on September 5th, 2009 06:59 am (UTC)

Wow hon, that was beautiful :D

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lijahlover on September 5th, 2009 07:07 am (UTC)

Thank you sweetie :)

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brissygirl on September 5th, 2009 08:24 am (UTC)

That was beautiful, short and sweet.

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lijahlover on September 6th, 2009 02:57 am (UTC)

Thanks so much :)

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nursedarry on September 5th, 2009 09:29 am (UTC)

Wow- short but powerful. And heartfelt. And lovely. (Stays with foody-themed icon)

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lijahlover on September 6th, 2009 02:57 am (UTC)

Thanks I love pumpkin pie *squishes*

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lijahlover on September 6th, 2009 02:57 am (UTC)

Thanks hun :)

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daftfear on September 5th, 2009 04:30 pm (UTC)

Aww that's so very beautiful. Really powerful. Went straight to my heart :)

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lijahlover on September 6th, 2009 02:58 am (UTC)

Thank you I'm happy you liked this poem :)

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cercenightshade on September 5th, 2009 04:32 pm (UTC)

Love it :D

and I did think of my favorite pairing :)

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lijahlover on September 6th, 2009 02:59 am (UTC)

Thanks and I had a different pairing in mind I'm sure than you :)

*Points to icon*

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facecat on September 6th, 2009 01:09 am (UTC)

Wow - love the last line.

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lijahlover on September 6th, 2009 02:59 am (UTC)

It is a very nice last line *squishes*

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julchen11 on September 8th, 2009 12:30 am (UTC)

Woah! That's fantastic, sweetie!
Excellent!
*hugs you close*

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lijahlover on September 8th, 2009 02:38 am (UTC)

Thank you *squishes*

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