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lijahlover
04 September 2009 @ 11:32 pm
HP poetic-Fall  
Title:As I Fall
Author:lijahlover
Pairing:Pick your favorite one and that's it.
Rating:G
Warnings:Major longing with determination...
Written in free-verse for poetic_hp -Fall

It's been awhile that I wrote a poem.... :)




I feel a tightening in my chest as I watch you with friends.

I blankly look at the leaves turning color as I envision us together;someday.

The crisp,cool breeze blows around me,chilling my body.

I need you,desire you to be close to me.

"Will you catch me as I fall or turn away?"
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AutumnVerse: Landscape 1autumnverse on September 5th, 2009 06:59 am (UTC)
Wow hon, that was beautiful :D
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lijahlover: First comment cookies!lijahlover on September 5th, 2009 07:07 am (UTC)
Thank you sweetie :)
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Brissygirlbrissygirl on September 5th, 2009 08:24 am (UTC)
That was beautiful, short and sweet.
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lijahlover: Tom in black and whitelijahlover on September 6th, 2009 02:57 am (UTC)
Thanks so much :)
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Darry Willis: treacle tartnursedarry on September 5th, 2009 09:29 am (UTC)
Wow- short but powerful. And heartfelt. And lovely. (Stays with foody-themed icon)
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lijahlover: Tom in black and whitelijahlover on September 6th, 2009 02:57 am (UTC)
Thanks I love pumpkin pie *squishes*
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lijahloverlijahlover on September 6th, 2009 02:57 am (UTC)
Thanks hun :)
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daftfear: Liedaftfear on September 5th, 2009 04:30 pm (UTC)
Aww that's so very beautiful. Really powerful. Went straight to my heart :)
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lijahlover: Tom in black and whitelijahlover on September 6th, 2009 02:58 am (UTC)
Thank you I'm happy you liked this poem :)
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cercenightshade on September 5th, 2009 04:32 pm (UTC)
Love it :D

and I did think of my favorite pairing :)
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lijahlover: Dan and Tom at Cricketlijahlover on September 6th, 2009 02:59 am (UTC)
Thanks and I had a different pairing in mind I'm sure than you :)

*Points to icon*
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worst-case-scenario girlfacecat on September 6th, 2009 01:09 am (UTC)
Wow - love the last line.
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lijahlover: Dan and Tom at Cricketlijahlover on September 6th, 2009 02:59 am (UTC)
It is a very nice last line *squishes*
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julchen11julchen11 on September 8th, 2009 12:30 am (UTC)
Woah! That's fantastic, sweetie!
Excellent!
*hugs you close*
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lijahlover: Fall leaf on tablelijahlover on September 8th, 2009 02:38 am (UTC)
Thank you *squishes*
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