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21 January 2008 @ 06:24 pm
Domlijah Hotness!  
Title:Volcano

lijahlover

Word Count:100

Rating:R

Summary: Dom and Elijah are hot for each other!

Warnings: Sex between two guys

Just for fun and this never happened to my knowledge.

betaed by no one all mistakes are mine.





Dom pins Elijah's hands down on the bed holding him down tightly, as his mouth ravishes Elijah's. Their tongues thrust in each others mouths frantically.

Dom starts to move down Elijah's body to his chest; he starts to suck on Elijah's sensitive nipple, running his tongue over and over it, causing Elijah to gasp and writhe under him. He brings his other hand up to lightly caress his other nipple at the same time.

Elijah is panting and moaning at the incredibile pleasure building up inside him like a volcano about to explode.

The sweat is dripping off of them.

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Aprilkataprilkat on January 22nd, 2008 02:10 am (UTC)
My, that's descriptive. Gives us the sense of intensity!
lijahloverlijahlover on January 22nd, 2008 02:12 am (UTC)
I was going for that. Thanks!:D

Just a question for you I didn't send this to my beta were there a lot of tense mistakes I can't tell?
Aprilkataprilkat on January 22nd, 2008 03:28 am (UTC)
No, I don't see any shifts in tense!

lijahloverlijahlover on January 22nd, 2008 06:31 am (UTC)
Thanks for the advice i'll fix it!:D
frolijah_fan_54frolijah_fan_54 on January 22nd, 2008 03:27 am (UTC)
Volcano is right - they are both about to blow!!
lijahloverlijahlover on January 22nd, 2008 06:30 am (UTC)
Thanks so much!:D
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lijahloverlijahlover on January 23rd, 2008 06:37 am (UTC)
Thanks so much!:D