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12 November 2008 @ 02:10 am
D/H Poem  
Title:Bitterly Cold Rain
Challenge:poetic_HP challenge "In the cold November Rain"
Warnings:Angst with a happy ending.
betaed by no one all mistakes are mine...

Harry sullenly stared, out the window

his red,puffy eyes taking in the cold November rain,

silently falling down to the hard ground.

Harry's tears fell with the rain drops,

slowly gliding down his face.

His heart breaking in his chest since Draco walked out.

Everyday he prayed that he would come back to him.

Harry suddenly gasped and looked up as the door started to open and

Draco walked in out of the bitterly cold rain.

In a way I feel like I cheated here since it doesn't rymn.
harrysexmagick: Yoursharrysexmagick on November 12th, 2008 02:46 pm (UTC)
I'm sobbing. I loved that WOW!

Edited at 2008-11-12 02:46 pm (UTC)
lijahlover: First comment cookies!lijahlover on November 12th, 2008 04:54 pm (UTC)
Thanks so much I was kind of nervous about this because I don't write a lot of poems *hugs*
harrysexmagick: eated my cookie w/ Snapeharrysexmagick on November 12th, 2008 04:59 pm (UTC)
Cookies Yeah!
Roelroelliej on November 12th, 2008 04:38 pm (UTC)
Draco always comes back ;)

lijahlover: Yellow leaflijahlover on November 12th, 2008 04:55 pm (UTC)
Of coarse he does if I'm writing it at least :)

She will be loved (hppyflwr)hppyflwr on November 12th, 2008 04:39 pm (UTC)
Holy Darn! that was so so so sad and perfect and just wondwerful. You are all that an a bag of jelly beans. I love jelly beans.

lijahlover: Yellow leaflijahlover on November 12th, 2008 04:55 pm (UTC)
Thanks so much I just loooooove the black jelly beans.

Hugs close!
julchen11: julchen1julchen11 on November 13th, 2008 05:12 am (UTC)
Wow! That's so gorgeous, sweetie.
I simply love it!
lijahlover: Dan reflectionlijahlover on November 13th, 2008 05:31 am (UTC)
Well thank you sweetie and I simply love the praise and you :)