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06 November 2007 @ 09:48 pm
Longing  
Dom looked at Elijah with longing,every day was the same.   One day he would walk up and tell him how he felt .  Working day by day together was difficult.  The nights were long and lonely.If only he could find the courage to tell him.  He would tell him how beautiful he was inside and out,he would tell him his eyes were more blue than the sky.  He was in love  with his friend.Dom had no way of knowing that Elijah felt exactly the same way. 

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Cat: Domlijah Profilecat_luvs_guysx2 on November 7th, 2007 10:25 am (UTC)
Longing, indeed. Poor Dom. You captured his feelings and insecurities well. So much emotion in so few words. You should do more of these. They are really quite good. ;D
lijahloverlijahlover on November 7th, 2007 05:08 pm (UTC)
It seems to me that I won't be able to stop myself.I love it to much.I just wish I knew how to post to Domlijah.There are to many things I don't understand about that.Hugs!
Writer of Dreamsspikessweetgirl on November 7th, 2007 11:40 am (UTC)
awww, this was sweet:)
lijahloverlijahlover on November 7th, 2007 05:09 pm (UTC)
Thank you,I am glad you liked it.
Summer aka Summershobbit: DomElijahlovesummershobbit on November 7th, 2007 02:28 pm (UTC)
So sad, and so beautiful, well put! This was really nice! I liked it a lot! :)

I hope you will do more of this!



lijahloverlijahlover on November 7th, 2007 05:10 pm (UTC)
Yeah! I am glad.I really do like writing.
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lijahloverlijahlover on November 7th, 2007 05:13 pm (UTC)
Thank you mews,that was one of my favorite lines also.I tell myself that in real life they still feal that way about each other.I know that is wishful thinking on my part.Hugs!
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lijahloverlijahlover on November 8th, 2007 02:42 pm (UTC)
Thanks you so much.I am glad you liked it.Hugs!
Taro: CartoonDomLij - ArmCandymother2012 on November 9th, 2007 12:39 am (UTC)
Since I am *always* backward, I read the second one first, without realizing this was here.

This one may be better than the other, I'm not sure. I would like to see them correctly punctuated, and may actually do that. In any case, there is a very good feeling here of the longing. I can picture Dom tossing and turning in bed, wondering how - or whether - to tell Elijah how he felt.
lijahloverlijahlover on November 9th, 2007 01:59 pm (UTC)
Plese feel free to correct it since I have a hard time with this.I just like to write and love them.This was my favorite on as well.I think if I ever seriosly were to post something I would definetly need a beta.If that would be their job.I don't no all that they do.I am still learning.Thanks again.
julchen11julchen11 on November 9th, 2007 09:14 pm (UTC)
So sad, so bittersweet and soooo romantic.
Perfect work, dearie! Go on this way!
lijahloverlijahlover on November 10th, 2007 06:26 am (UTC)
Thank you so much for the kind words.I appriciate it.Hugs!
julchen11julchen11 on November 10th, 2007 05:01 pm (UTC)
FRIENDS!
*hugs you back very tight*