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09 July 2008 @ 01:15 am
Orlijah Month Challenge  
Title:Burning Desire Part Two
Author:lijahlover
Orlijah
Challenge:Speed Challenge you have 5 minutes to write this.
Rating:PG-13
Dancing and grinding in this part *g*
betaed by no one all mistakes are mine...



Phototbucket-Saying


Elijah raked his eyes over every inch of Orlando's body admiring every part of this stunning man. Elijah smirked and pulled him close to his body and started grinding his hips into Orli's. Elijah yelled,"I'm Elijah and who are you?"

"Orlando" he replied as he started to run his hands up and down Elijah's back slowly enjoying the feel of his slim, sexy body.

Elijah pressed in closer and grabbed Orli's hips rubbing their growing erections together. Elijah started to kiss and suck on his throat. "Oh God Elijah" Orli moaned as he felt Elijah's lips on his sweat slick skin. "Bloody hell mate lets take this to my place."

"Yes" Elijah replied "I want to dance in your room just the two of us."

Part One
 
 
 
[Ex-Ex-Ex-Oh]: no one gets away until they whip itglamoursnipe on July 9th, 2008 01:38 pm (UTC)
I can barely write my name in five minutes, so big ups to you on that score.

And...big ups to the last line, too.
lijahlover: First comment cookies!lijahlover on July 9th, 2008 07:36 pm (UTC)
Well these 5 minute challenges are fun but no chance for a beta so I worry about little mistakes that I can't catch myself. I loved that last line too. *g*
[Ex-Ex-Ex-Oh]: my angel is the centerfoldglamoursnipe on July 11th, 2008 01:11 pm (UTC)
Don't feel bad--my best friend betas me, if anyone does; he's obsessed with everything I write, right up to and including fake fantasy rock albums, complete with song-title track lists and descriptions cover art (my way of doodling on a napkin when I'm bored). Plus my work tends to be on the lengthy side, so I've never been comfortable saying, "Here. Read this and make sure I didn't fuck anything up."

(That Death Assortment crap I write? My best friend's idea. Or rather, he was the one who suggested that I create a pretty cool chick who gets dumped by Dom for Evi and ends up being Elijah Wood's total soul mate in the bargain; I'm the one who threw in all the murder and monsters and time travel and rednecks and eccentric bass players and whory rich female guitarists.)

But anyway...

Long live DanceSlash.
lijahlover: Mr.Right and Prince Charminglijahlover on July 11th, 2008 05:52 pm (UTC)
Dance slash *g* Very nice!
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lijahlover: Orlandolijahlover on July 9th, 2008 07:37 pm (UTC)
Thanks I just worry because you can't send it to be betaed they are fun though!
julchen11: elijah - no worriesjulchen11 on July 9th, 2008 08:16 pm (UTC)
You did this in 5 minutes??? Wow, it's great, dearie!
Love it! And YOU!
lijahlover: Orlandolijahlover on July 9th, 2008 08:25 pm (UTC)
Thanks they can be inspiring with their hotness *g* *clings to you*