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02 July 2008 @ 01:06 am
Orlijah B-day fic!  
Title:Burning Desire
Author:lijahlover
Orlijah
Challenge:Speed Challenge you have 5 minutes to write this.
Rating:PG
betaed by no one all mistakes are mine.

This is for arabia764 Happy Birthday hun XD


Orlando barely heard the beat of the music when he looked up, his eyes narrowed as they moved over this stunning man in front of him everything stopped as he felt his throat muscles constrict and his body throb with a burning desire as the pulsing beat washed over him. He finally remembers to breath before he passed out. He quickly finished his beer and stood up he had to make his move and ask him to dance. The thrill of excitement raced through him as he walks towards him, he runs his eyes over his tight, black, silk shirt and impossibly tight blue jeans. He licked his lips and approached the sexy, beautiful stranger he paused to draw in a breath and asked,"Let's dance."

Part Two

 
 
 
Aprilkataprilkat on July 2nd, 2008 04:29 pm (UTC)
I love the way the sentences reflect how Orli feels - the story could easily be called "Breathless"! Sexy!
lijahlover: First comment cookies!lijahlover on July 3rd, 2008 04:11 am (UTC)
Thanks so much and a good title too XD
julchen11: eiljahjulchen11 on July 2nd, 2008 05:40 pm (UTC)
Beautiful! What a lovely gift, babe!
I'm sure the birthday girl will love it. I do :-)
lijahlover: Frodolijahlover on July 3rd, 2008 04:12 am (UTC)
Thanks so much and she loved it *hugs*
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lijahloverlijahlover on July 3rd, 2008 04:12 am (UTC)
Ohhh thanks those 5 minute challenges can be a lot of fun. :)